Cheers! glad you like my stuff

Hey, JTG
nice work here, I can see that you've improved since the last thing i saw of yours. Your anatomy is much better. I would say tho that you're focusing on each part of him as you draw it without seeing the hole picture. for example, his hand and arm are pretty well drawn but the size of his hand and length of the arm dont match the body. Getting limbs in proportion is the main thing to look at first when you do a rough sketch. He also looks a little off balance too (leaning back) so you might wanna watch that. The main thing that stands out tho is the face. the position of the mouth and nose are too low and the expression is not quite right. It may seem like a long way round of doing it but you need to draw the whole face and then draw the mask over it. It might be a good idea to use photo references if that helps. You dont need to draw things out of your head all the time. If you find a pose in a magazine or take a photo yourself to use its a good way of learnig. Your use of spot blacks has also improved but you might wanna watch the hatching as it looks a little scruffy. try to keep inks as neat as possible.
Its still a nice pic tho and a big improvement.
If you want lots more tips and advice then I'd recommend you post your work on Penciljack.com a really good site if you wanna learn more!
hope that helps you out!
WH

not bad thanks, mate.... howz things with you? keeping that mouse busy i hope